The Unsual Response
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What’s on your mind…..?
She asked, after a long silence.
I took a proper look at her to be sure she’s ready for my response.
What’s on my mind?, I asked again…..
Well…… This is it!
My mind shows the picture of a hungry wailing child, a mal nourished breastfeeding single mother.
My mind displays the agony of an orphan on the street, with no relative or food to feed.
My mind pictures a widower roaming the market with a huge list, little money and a family to feed.
My mind is filled with pain for the innocent man arrested and paraded for a crime he knows nothing about, a family man with a new born baby.
My mind tells the tale of a shattered family, whose only child was shot by the stray bullet of a uniform man on his way back from serving his country.
What’s on my mind…?
Oh, it’s the young school girl sexually abused by a man she calls father, disbelieved and called a list by her mother.
Enough….she said in tears, I expected the usual response “nothing much”.
This is just too much in there to relay,
People are really going through a whole lot, I must confess.
Oh yes, and my mind has a lot in it, so when next you ask what’s on my mind, be rest assured it’s not the usual response you’ll get.
If people are going through a whole lot, why cause them more pains..?
If you can be a pencil to rewrite someone’s happiness, try to be an eraser to erase their sadness.
By Blessing Udoh.
A writer and a poet.
You're doing well dearie
Thank you so much, not my poem though.